My wonderful Shixo :)
I'll say just one thing...Harsh.

Pain still waves within my neck,
Waiting for my throats suffocation
I am near the doors of heaven
But I got neither mercy nor salvation

My fave one =]]

xx

Sad yet so touching with strong meanings.
Yeah i truly like your style, keep it up.

OMG.What a wonderful poem shaima.I really missed your poems a lot and that one was absloutly fantastic>
Your dark poems are really sad and frightning too>

Excellent sis.
5\5...

Such strong emotions! I have a thing for dark poetry and this one was a really good read short but powerful verses.
Very Well done.
Candice

Sounds like hell. Black fire, is the hottest flame there is. and i see hell.

Dude you are so good at wrighting! i'm no so good >.>(more like i suke at it but hay)

Wow I have to say I agree with Nema, I loved those lines the most! Your poem was very Strong..I was happy to see you wrote a new one. 5/5

Nice dark write......