Comments : Hell Hound

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    Great piece just in time for Halloween :)

    It nodded in assent
    And eyed me
    With a most salacious
    And somewhat sagacious expression
    Knowing
    I would soon be the feast
    Of this horrid beast

    Undoubtedly
    A leash could not restrain him

    No crucifix
    Or holy water would protect me

    So those of us lacking religious zeal
    May find we make a tasty meal

    I love the ending toi this spine chilling poem.
    Great!
    (((hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Melissa

    AAAh this is just too awesome! The rhyming worked so doggone well here, it was so fun to read. And the ending, just WOW! Very cool piece here and what a perfect day to read it. Happy Halloween to me!