Someday

This poem shows nice and beautiful expressions...I feel this same way. It's crazy because it seems like we could get along really well. Anyways this poem was very beautiful 5/5

"Catch my soul - it's forever calling,
For you and me to never be apart,"
Catch?Calling? to never be apart? Bad vocab ><

"Hear my soul - it's always praying,
Praying for our love to be true,
Wait for me - even if we're swaying,
Because someday I will be with you..."
I like this last stanza, good finish.
4/5

Ahhh this was so beatiful! When I first read it I didnt have time to comment so I nominated for the weekly contest because its worthy of a win. The style in which you wrote in was unique and very appealing to the eye while I was reading. The flow was flawless and the rhymes you used didnt seem to be forced and just fit together perfectly. The love expressed here was just so beautiful it made me smile. Every girl wishes the guy of their dreams will say that to them, it was very sweet and cute! You can capture many hearts with the genuine emotions and desires you expressed. Beautifully written, one the best poems I've read in a while.

"Open my eyes - they're always seeing,
Seeing your hearts deepest desires,
Take me away - the life you're freeing,
Quickly before our time here expires,"
^ This stanz was so beautiful and my fave!

Well done.
*5/5* :]

I honestly loved this piece of yours it was so moving and cutee:) You had a lovely way with words throughout the whole piece. My favorite was probably the last line because it summed the whole poem up just beautifully. Nice job 5/5

Bravo! My favorite parts were definitely the first line of every stanza. The pause in it was a little bizarre but it did have an effect that dazzled. Your rhyme was impeccable and your wording was outstanding. Overall it was a sweet, cute poem.