Comments : Reverie

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    I really really love this piece Jenn

    It flows so sweetly!!

    I bear the minutes, count the seconds
    Through it all your memory beckons
    Soon I'll eliquet race to be with you
    Living what my daydream knew
    ^^^
    Love the ending ....
    When the work day end we get to fulfill the sweet daydreams.

    Beautiful read .... loved the rhyme scheme and the gentle flow of your words. Loved the title !!!
    Well done
    Luanne

  • 9 years ago

    by Sourav

    Beautiful lines and well expressed. Very interesting to read. A good one!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Unbelievably great job! i really connected to your poem and liked how it was complex in the way you worded it it was refreshing : ) 5/5 ((i voted for you))

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats for a beautiful Poem....What a treat to see the weekly winners this week :)
    RTVW ROCKS!!!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The excellence is self evident

    great work

  • 9 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is an excellent write and very good flow. The words roll off your tongue with ease. Wonderful topic and evokes memories of years past.

    I think this is my favorite verse, because I can remember those days.

    I wish to dream the day away
    Lost in thought of yesterday
    When tender lips caressed my skin
    Drew me down and pulled me in

  • 9 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Heartfelt congrats on your win...beautiful poem with great sentiment and rhyme and flow awesome!

  • 9 years ago

    by IML

    The best one i have seen yet on this website.
    i really enjoyed reading this one and it made all perfect sense and it reminds me of my old memories.
    thank you!