Great poem...very beautifully written...so full of sadness and passion within it...no its not that long...i think that it was nesesarry for it to b this long...for it conveyed all its feeling prttty well :) great job ..5/5

Wow this really touched me. you really expressed yourself well.

I agree with danny. this isnt long. it was realy worth reading it. and i can relate to this. we try to forgot our past we forget or present our future. very nice writen my friend. amazong job. keep it up gurl.

take care alwayz,
Frenchy

This poem Is ASOME I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

This poem isnt long at all it wuz worth reading! I luv it! It haz an awesome meaning to it! Good Job!!!

Wow its soul deep u must have been searching real deep in yourself with a shavel and pick..

This was worth the read, it's very good =]
and the emotion put into this piece was beautiful, really nice work =] 5/5