Comments : Dear Satan

  • 8 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Kinda creepy but i can totally relate to the feeling. I've learned ,however, as dumb as it sounds... "All will be alright in the end, and if its not alright, then its not the end."

  • 8 years ago

    by isabel

    Really a quite creepy poem...(happy halloween... :) a nice read for today... ;) )

    Also a quite long poem...But worth the read...

    It flows pretty nicely and it has an intersting rhyme scheme...

    I still wonder... in the 5th stanza...
    Instead "Are those that have broken my heart" wouldn't it sound better "Are those who broke my heart" ?

    the poem is amazing, though :)
    5/5 doubtless

    *isabel*

  • 8 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I think this is dark, emotional with lots of doubts. Written well, keep working on these types of poems I see perfection.

  • 8 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    You obviously have talent, it kept my interest the whole way through, partly cause im a follower of God's but either way, i like reading dark and creepy things and you hit it right on the bullseye, good work 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by iloveHIMonly

    Oh my gosh. That was intense. I could feel the rage and emotion you were feeling when you wrote this. Definitely understood the things you were feeling while going through this. Wow. Incredible. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Omg babe...
    scary...
    i like it tho...
    wow<3

  • 7 years ago

    by Ares

    You were right, it definitly very powerful and packed with lots of emotion. Still I find this kind of vulerability to it which is quite freeing when reading this sorts of poems. It's very hard to do and often it's subliminalt in that you're so obsessed with spilling out all this anger and all this hatred, yet adding this pinch of something vulnerable.

    Remarkable job.

    --ares

  • 6 years ago

    by Aurora Dubnyk

    I really liked this one! It shows how we would do anything to show a person our emotions even if it is negative emotions. i like how you describe it has selling your soul for power. i like it a lot!

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    Nice flow, reads nicely. Definately a creepy proposal. well done