I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Short, but full of thought and power.
These lines especially stuck out to me:

"Blood drips slowly and stains where it lays,
Trapt in another miserable day."

Stroke of genius there, my dear.
Again, tugging on my heart strings.

This was a good one. I like the way you write. Your flow is great.
Thanks and keep it up plz.

This Here fits me perfectly you know what i am talking about.
Sometimes innocence loses it's touch,
And being perfect seems like too much.
Changing just to fit in with the bunch,
Looking so brave, but not feeling such.
5/5 Caleb Hammett AKA UR BFF