Hell

by AngelicDecadence   Nov 1, 2008


Death and burning flames...
It's funny how everyone's scared of hell,
When if they listened and were learning,
Hell isn't bad, it's a shell.

Hell is a passing place,
Not the burning plains,
The Lake of Fire is the pain,
Hell itself isn't to blame.

Death comes to hell,
But only the souls,
From there, the angel that fell,
Whom remains, and holds.

He is the keeper of the dead,
But if they are evil
Into the fire they are fed.
Do not blame the devil.

It is Satan's punishment,
His own personal hell,
Do you truly think he gets fulfillment,
From living in that shell?

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  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    This reminds me of my poem, *Holes of Fire*. It really tells deep, of your understanding on this. Amazing..

  • 14 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    He is the keeper of the dead,
    But if they are evil
    Into the fire they are fed.
    Do not blame the devil.

    that part is sweet but its so true this poem is way dark but i like it alot its goin in my favs as are you 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very powerful! absolutely loved it!!

  • 15 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    Another one of your poems that is not my favourite. The flow seems to come and go, and the ideas behind the poem seem a bit atskew at moments. But, the main idea is very original, and it is presented in a way that isn't disgustingly childish or familiar. Thank you

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    Hey I never thought of it as having to indure satan's hell and not my own. love the idea. At some points in your poem I did get lost a little bit, but that's probaly because some parts read differently than they would if you were writting a short story not a poem.

    Any who loved the imaginitive view point.

    Thanks for the read.

    >~Spirit~>

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