I agree with his angel the rhythm didnt flow the hole way through but it was still a great poem i really liked the way you ran the title through the poem the format was cool.
the poem showed quite clearly what you felt im sorry if it ended that way but you expressed it well still a 5/5 from me
This was harder for me to read. You might want to not leave a space between the letters when you do a poem like this. I liked the tribute that you were obviously paying to a friend that was there for you.
I thought that this was pretty good. I liked that u made it acrostic that's something I personally find difficult. But I didn't give it a 5/5 bcuz I think that u could have have it rhyme a little better. Which I did see that u did little and that was good. But I think that if u made it rhyme a little more and made the lines a little shorter it would have been a little easier 2 read and understand. But it was a pretty good poem. I liked it.