School out

by dirtyhands   Nov 6, 2008


One step closer and almost there
one more sem and school is over
no more books and pens to care
no need for papers that had to share

goodbye my classmates that always thier
thanks for those answers that you always bare
goodbye my teachers i used to fear
dun forget 'bout this student that you always steer

for all the lesson that you have shared
and all my papers that you have teared
thank you sir for being there
and make my heart ruined by fear

thanks to our canteen that provides us food
even though it tastes no good
also thanks to our janitors that clean our floors
just please dun make some bores

and to our guard that always sleep
ill give you gift that always beep
for you to keep this school from harm
and let me enter with just my charm

i dedicate this heartful poem
to my beloved, awful mom
believing that im in school
she doesnt know poker is cool,

lol,i dun think this great but mabe this s just fine,
leave some coments please for improvment,,

tnx aussie
dirtyhands

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Lol i liked it. Although i do agree with lenny, started off really well but the ending wasnt quite as well written, and theres a few spelling errors. But apart from that its an exceptionally good write. =] Great work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Always and Never

    I agree with Lenny, but besides that, i really liked the poem, it made me remember back a few years to my last day of school. funny poem, 4/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lenny

    Heh a few words are missing here and there. Its started strong but you got a lil lazy at the end :p

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Reading your poem, makes me laugh. I remember the last week at school before holiday, i felt the same as in your poem.
    very good poem that makes me laugh, keep it up, kel.