Comments : The Day Two Hearts Stopped

  • 8 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Wow, Cindy. That was awesome. I loved the wording and style of it. I thought the emotion was strong and powerful and made me want to cry (Though everything does these days) i thought you did a brilliant jpb.
    Love Tara-Kay

  • 8 years ago

    by Deana

    Cindy ,I think this is the best I have read of your work so moving and Real. It really brought tears to my eyes. I love the form and flow of it. Excellent Cindy!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great poem Cindy!

    At times I feel you near me
    The smell of your cologne hangs in the air
    If the wind blows through the trees just right
    I can almost hear your voice calling my name
    How I miss that sound.

    Truly, we miss our loveones. Their memories keep us strong.

    "Hearts may stopped but Forever Love goes on."

    Your friend,
    Ray

  • 8 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Cindy,

    each and every word has so much emotion behind it, making the whole piece so sad.

    As a poem its structure is such that the lines that you want to have maximum impact, do just that, they reach out and grabs your empathy and pulls it so hard.

    I believe that all good poems should grab the reader, evoke their responses and make them think. This poem makes you think hard and makes you appreciate the good that we have in our lives and to never take it for granted, because life is precious and sadly too fragile.

    Well done on an excellent piece.

    ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very very good job you really do a great job of making the reader feel your pain i really felt for you like it sounds so painful to go through and im sorry : / you wrote this poem very well though! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Corinne

    Cindy
    I feel this is one of your best pieces. Such depth of feeling, and honesty. It's a remarkable work.

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Your magical words has made every single reader's eyes wet. Simple things that we do in life and mostly end up taking for granted, all those has been mentioned with emotions and i am sure the true value will stay deep inside for a long time.
    Great write dear, it deserves to be read by thousands.
    You are simply awesome.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Very nice Cindy, I really enjoyed this piece. It automatically drew me to my aunt because it sounds so much like what she has been going through since my uncles passing last year. Thank you for sharing it, great job.

  • 8 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Excellent. Brought tears to my eyes and I can feel the pain in your words. The images you painted with your words are breathtaking.

  • 8 years ago

    by DiamondEYES

    It's so sad. is it about some one you knew?

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Lu

    Cindy ~hugs~

    You have moved me to tears dear friend.

    At times I feel you near me
    The smell of your cologne hangs in the air
    If the wind blows through the trees just right
    I can almost hear your voice calling my name
    How I miss that sound
    ^^^
    No one can even begin to imagine the pain behind these words until they have lost a loved one. The smell that still lingers and the voice that still whispers. The feeling that pounds deep in the heart and yearns so terribly for the touch, the whisper of voice, the kiss and hug, the smile they loved so dearly.

    My heart is with you through these times hun.
    Believe !!! you will be together again.

    Without God ... there is no heaven ... and I wholeheartedly BELIEVE there is a heaven and your John is there and you will be one again hun.

    ~Big hugs~ BELIEVE hun.

    And when the days are long and the nights are even longer and you feel alone .... close your eyes and you will feel his arms wrapped tightly around you.
    Love ya
    Luanne

  • 8 years ago

    by Knee

    Aw Cindy !
    I really love this one
    actually the fact that it didn't rhyme made it even more beautiful
    I loved the ending so much, despite the sadness in it.

    If the wind blows through the trees just right
    I can almost hear your voice calling my name

    Those lines took my breath away, my fave part..nicely written

    Very well done on this hun
    write on xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Knee

    Cindy, that was a beautiful piece indeed !
    Actually the fast that it didn't rhyme made it even more beautiful.
    I loved the ending so much, despite the sadness it held..

    If the wind blows through the trees just right
    I can almost hear your voice calling my name

    Those lines took my breath away..truly nicely written, my fave part :)

    I commented on the poem once but I don't know where the hell did my comment escape, lol !

    Anyway this was a great read.
    Write on
    xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Poetess

    Geezus cindy!
    this has to be the most heart breaking poem i've read. and definitely one of your best. i'm still crying and i've read it about four times. i'm about to go read it again.
    heartbreakingly beautiful.

    love you!
    -Liz

  • 8 years ago

    by NICOLE

    This is a really great poem. I like the style, and imagery. You were really able to express the feeling of "heartbreak" very well.

  • 8 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    As always such a truly beautiful and heartwarming piece. 5/5 It brings depth and feeling to me.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mathew Fouts

    They way you convey your sadness is truly beautiful. Your poem fills me with sadness, although it's nothing compared to what you actually feel. It is a beautiful tribute to the one you Love.

  • 8 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    I feel your words, I hear your words, I see your words, I know your words, I know your voice.
    Cindy you are a gentle soul, one who feels.
    You still catch me off guard with your poetry like no other.
    I truly hope you are well.
    I have always and will hold dear kind thoughts of you.
    5/5 for a heartfelt piece,

  • 8 years ago

    by Gem

    "Sometimes I think it's all a dream
    I'll wake up you'll be there
    Smiling at me with that grin
    the one I fell in love with"

    My heart constricted when i read this stanza.
    And it goes out to you at the same time!

    I've missed your poetry so much Cindy. You have a way with words few can match

    Love Gem x

  • 8 years ago

    by SADADDY

    The sense of sadness is felt in these words you have expressed in this write. May you find peace and joy deep within your heart once again soon.

    sadaddy