Death Upon Sweet Oblivion

by eNiGmAtIc pReY   Nov 11, 2008


Lush, blood-like petals and thorns betrothed
With dazzling beauty that stuns within
Tragically beautiful, one might say
Paying tribute to your melancholic end.

Flowers resembling but drops of blood
Spilled across the blades of grass
Cold, stricken resemblance of crimson regrets
Stenciled under the sweltering sun's canvas.

Each of our memories slowly crumpled to ash
As each was replaced by a less fond memory
With one less precious thing in life
When ruthless death had taken away thee.

Engrave forever upon the symphony of silence
Like a hopeless scar breaking through haze.
Heart spindled in specks of severe loneliness
Without any attempt of escape from such maze.

Unfazed, never-ending slumber, thee, now have
With no torrent woes and torment to pry
You serenely left without lingering plight
Secretly telling us, upon your death, we shouldn't cry.

Undaunted, you faced the brink of death alone
Never told us you were trapped in such awful rut
And chose to forever etch a smile upon your face
Yet still, your memories will be kept in everyone's heart.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    As usual..

    just what i'm expecting from my idol..

    heheheh..

    four feet up!

    yea!!

    ^o^

  • 9 years ago

    by sheena

    Dili na lang q movote....kabaw naman cguro ka....

  • 9 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great lines, introduction is perfect~

    Lush, blood-like petals and thorns betrothed
    With dazzling beauty that stuns within
    Tragically beautiful, one might say
    Paying tribute to your melancholic end.

    Powerful, message on your body~

    Flowers resembling but drops of blood
    Spilled across the blades of grass
    Cold, stricken resemblance of crimson regrets
    Stenciled under the sweltering sun's canvas.

    Excellent ending~

    Undaunted, you faced the brink of death alone
    Never told us you were trapped in such awful rut
    And chose to forever etch a smile upon your face
    Yet still, your memories will be kept in everyone's heart.

    The title matched the poem. I would like you give this a 10 if possible here:) 5/5!