Comments : Secret Love Wish

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    So heartbreaking hun.
    Im sorry.
    I can imagine what this conclusion is doing to you sweety, tearing you apart.. making you question yourself...
    Im always here to talk..

    Luv ya Darling.
    -Elaine. 5.5

  • 15 years ago

    by Truth In Hiding

    Oh wow.
    this is so deep. [:
    I love itttttt!
    Keep writingggggggg.
    :D

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely written...I like that this poem was written in a sort of confessional manner. I can feel the emotion running through th epoem from start to finish.The rhyming was great.the simple words that you used really allows gets to the reader...to feel and relate to the emotions that you have displayed.

    Excellent Job
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    5/5