Comments : Forgotten, not Forgiven.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    The thing i would change is swap the last to stanzas so the one with the title is the ending : )
    i loved it hunn ! great job of letting your emotions pour out onto the page i hope this is really what happening in your life that your "unplugging"
    5/5 : )

  • 15 years ago

    by Ria

    Nice rhyming and a pleasant read!

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    I agree with Composed Catastrophe. I loved it though Ash. I was so excited when i realized it said 30 instead of 29 next to your name! beautiful poem. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Wow such a good poem!
    loved every word kinda reminds me of my ex!
    well written
    xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    '''I remove all the memories,
    Brought on by the years'''
    >>>> "Made through out the years"

    Lol soz just had to write that! Loveeee this poem hun, I especially love the titleeeee I totaly agree, I dont forgive I just forgive, Its so hard though, it hurts so much carrying all the anger for so many years.... 5/5 xx

  • 15 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Ps I disagree with the other 2! I think the ending is perfect :) xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Clown

    I loved it, its a poem about moving on and about not forgiving the one that hurt u, its great. Moving on is hard, im trying to do it right now, i wish i could do it this easily. but i guess thats the price i pay for a marrage.lol, beautifully written poem and im happy that you moved on from your heartach