Comments : Wedding bells ( String Senryu)

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A clear cloudless day,
    African sun beating down
    Lovers hearts take flight

    I like the way how you draw the reader into
    your world. The whole picture can be seen with the African sun that potrays the atmosphere of this day...liked it!

  • 8 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a well penned, romantic poem Ingrid, describing the day two hearts are enwined as one.
    As usual with your work, your words are full of great imagery and description, creating a piece so beautiful to read. Well done!