I'm About To Jump

by Rowena Smith   Nov 27, 2008


About to jump
From a building top.......

With people looking up in shock

I am going to do it
I know I am...

With a scream and a cry...

I jump.......
With no one there
To catch me.....

I keep falling and falling...........

With no one there to hold me
And say...
Please don't go

I keep falling and falling..........

With no one there
To whisper I care...

I keep falling and falling.........

About to jump
From a building top.....

I cry out with sadness.......
That tears at the people's hearts
Who are watching below

Some cry out
Don't do it.....

And others start to cry......
With tears dripping down their faces

They cover their eyes in shock........

As I jumped from the building top

With a scream and a cry........

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Mmmm I'll think I'll doo that! Thanks! I had to write it down cuz it was in my head since 6:30am this morning!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    When somone is lonley , and no one to talk or wishper to , it si very hard , to imagine the feling of falling inside your soul , and deeply scream with no one to hear those screams!!!

    great job

    i would say it si a very nice pice but i hope you cut it into stanzas it si better then 1 block of words !!
    ^_^^
    great great one 5/5