Comments : Expressions of love

  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Very passionate and well written, my dear friend:)
    May it always burn this brightly:)
    Bravo!
    I will see if I have a vote left and then you will get it!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 8 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    How wonderful this was. Every word chocolate sweet ^-^. You passion and love is amazing and to be able to put it to words is perfection. Grant you have penned points with your wife 100 magnified. Incredible poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Paiger

    Very Beautiful :) I love the the line: into flames they ignite, it really helps start the mood for this poem, I think this line helped me start visualising, and feeling this poem myself.

    Great play with words as always :) great one grant, love it :)

    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Cara

    Visualizing this one might be a bit awkward :P
    Nah, it was fantastic. i really loved it. I also like the steps you wrote about. It was very
    good.
    i dont really have a lot to say.. because it was flawless :]
    Great work..
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Sourav

    Interestingly well written poem. Very erotic yet graceful. Nice work!