Very passionate and well written, my dear friend:)
May it always burn this brightly:)
Bravo!
I will see if I have a vote left and then you will get it!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

How wonderful this was. Every word chocolate sweet ^-^. You passion and love is amazing and to be able to put it to words is perfection. Grant you have penned points with your wife 100 magnified. Incredible poem

Very Beautiful :) I love the the line: into flames they ignite, it really helps start the mood for this poem, I think this line helped me start visualising, and feeling this poem myself.

Great play with words as always :) great one grant, love it :)

5/5

Visualizing this one might be a bit awkward :P
Nah, it was fantastic. i really loved it. I also like the steps you wrote about. It was very
good.
i dont really have a lot to say.. because it was flawless :]
Great work..
5/5

Interestingly well written poem. Very erotic yet graceful. Nice work!