Around me, my broken heart

by Smilie   Dec 3, 2008


I look around me
Everything is dark, I am so lonely
I stand here with my broken heart in my arms
Trying to piece it all together
It don't fit like a puzzle
he managed to steal a piece away
there's a hole in my heart
a big dark hole
my emotions ooze out of it
i try hard and harder to control it
but i can't
finally i break apart onto the floor
i look around me
life moves on, but my body lays still
with my broken heart still in my arms
my emotions lay astray
spilled across the floor
for the whole world to see
only they don't, they all ignore me
around me, alone with my broken heart

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Nice work. Deep and sad. Keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    What are hearts like ay! make you feel so good but when thats gone boi does it hurt! your an amzing writer hunni xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Smilie

    Yea we are, very much actually

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow dat ahhmazin..guess we both sufferin frm dis brokn heart thing huh?..