Comments : Like Fire

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I like the way you penned this sort of warning letter to those who want to draw themself nearer to you.Using the fire as your metaphor indeed brings out the emotions that you wish to convey;)

    Excellent Job
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow I loved how you used fire in your poem great job. 5/5