Her story

by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs   Dec 16, 2008


Shes filled with sadness loaded with despair
all because of him i bet he doesn't care. She knows
its time to go separate ways but she doesn't want
to admit, just thinking of them breaking up makes
her feel so sick.

He cusses her out and calls her names, she looks
in the mirror and is filled with shame. 2 years they
been together, its time to let go, she already knows
he doesn't love her but she doesn't let it show.

She keeps their memories of him and her even to
this day, you see she only sees him sometimes and
yet he still causes her pain. He doesn't trust her, he
thinks she lies, he asks wats wrong she says I'm fine.

At time when she cries he just asks why? How is she
suppose to stop when all he thinks is she lies? I love you she says but he doesn't reply, she hangs up the
phone and begins to cry. He calls her back claiming
it was a mistake, she only hangs up its more then
she can take.

She loves him more than anything, I bet you can see,
she tries to keep her relationships together, yet it falls
uncontrollably. It seems like her best just isn't good enough, he still says he loves her so she stays tough.
Its those long cold lonely nights that she cries herself
asleep, wishing he was there than the harder she weeps.

The beautifulest guy makes her feel this way, she loved
him alot so she decided to stay. When ever they were together, which was only sometimes, she cherished
those moments but now she must leave them behind.
They loved each other very much but he always treated her wrong, it was him and in his arms she thought she
belonged.

They said they'd be together forever, no one thought
they'd end up this way, it wasn't her fault bcuz it was him that changed.
No one understood her, no one knew but me, this story isn't about her,..... because this story is about ME....

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  • 14 years ago

    by Yours Truly xO

    This is your best, your a good writer keep it up (=

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    Great poem(: Sort of easy for me to relate to.

    Respectfully Edward's,
    Cherish Rose.

    P.S. Boo. Too bad you don't like Edward Cullen. I love him. ):

  • 15 years ago

    by ~*~becky~*~

    Tihs poem really is amazing! the flow in it is so good! and the way you convey your feelings is awesome!

  • 15 years ago

    by Samantha

    This is an awesome poem and is very heartfelt
    The rhythm and flow is really good the words are amazing I love this!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sam

    Wow that's srong. I now how hat feels. My feance and I were like hat and hen he did of cancer. Now I'm dating someone else and I feel so right wih him. I jus hope and pray that he feels he same way about me.

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