Beautiful piece that has such meaning. I really love the form you wrote it in, and you wrote this poem perfectly! Great work, take care and keep writing...

I absolutely adored reading this poem. You did an outstanding job writing it!

'sticky puddles', 'ingrained in my skin', and 'scattered on my flesh'
^^ Such vivid imagery, kudos for such word usage.

'but in time it shall be replaced, by a better flavour'
- Though I don't believe the comma should be there, it's such an amazing ending to such a short, yet sweet and emotional poem.

The emotional boundaries set in this poem are amazing, followed by the imagery and the flow you've put through-out. It also seems you did a swell job with keeping the syllable count intact (:

I liked the simplicity of this work of yours and found it refreshing - it quenched my poets thirst. nicely done! very well worded