Hopeless Romantic but Kicking the Habit.

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Dec 19, 2008


So, this is what I've become.
Your perspective is quite unique.
Such elegance in the breakdown.
Somehow, still shockingly chic.

A tainted ensemble of intrusion.
So many sentiments and misconceptions.
Not to forget the blissful betrayals,
featuring the infinite hidden deceptions.

Crisp flashbacks of perfectly
initiated but false affection.
Even some passive reassurance
of seemingly genuine protection.

What an amusing puzzle with
insignificant forgotten pieces.
Somewhere you discovered
rare reactions without ceasing.

Elegant yet defenseless line of love
is unmercifully violated by hate.
Realizations that perhaps
no one can actually relate.

An enticing illusion, crawling
with twisted conclusions.
Such an intriguing devotion of
rare and manipulative emotion.

Those entertaining useless memories
frequently appear to harass your mind.
Just the flawless performance of acted
feelings you wish could be left behind.

So, this is what I've become.
Your perspective is quite unique.
Well, how insightful.
Same time next week?

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    An excellent write from an good poet. I loved your choice of words. You used a very wide selection of vocabulary, which is always nice to see. The structure was very good and well put together.

    Overall a great write that obviously took some thought to produce. Excellent work as always, keep up the great work. You have a lot of talent, and I'll be back to read more.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    This piece is good, however, I don't think it's your best. While your word choice is, once again, excellent, your rhyming is off in a few places.

    "What an amusing puzzle with
    insignificant forgotten pieces.
    Somewhere you discovered
    rare reactions without ceasing."

    = I'd work on fixing the pieces/ceasing bit. It kind of throws off the flow when the rest of the poem rhymes and there are a few places where it doesn't. Also, stanza 6- conclusions/emotion.

    Those are the only things I find that I feel should be fixed. Everything else is great. Good job. :)

    ``Briana

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Beautiful flow!
    loved this poem
    5/5
    xo

  • 15 years ago

    by XxRed RougexXKoRn

    Wow i don't see how people can see any thing wrong with this one i really loved the first and last stanza's

    i hope to be a good writer someday
    awesome work keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Diamondz

    I Absolutely love This Poem!!
    You Really Put Some Effort Into it
    5/5- I mean 100/100

    It is really a masterpiece-
    *I love Your Choice Of Words*
    _Brilliant_

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