Such a sad but beautiful write, awesome job I really like this poem it's very well written and the rhyming flow is perfect. The only little thing you could do is to change all youR i's into capps ( I ) =] but really other than that this poem is really good 5/5
Great Work ^^
They say that in order to start anew, we first have to hit rock bottom. You have to feel that click that says it's time to change your direction or perish...I think that many times in life we go downhill, for whatever reason..be it losing a relationship, your health, a child, parents, you name it....we feel like losing ourselves in our grief then, until the day comes we find the strength to pick ourselves up again.
Letting out what you feel is a very important part of healing..