An interesting use of the racial stereotypes. You have a basis for something excellent here.

Wow.. Great message behind.. 5/5

Wow.. Great message behind.. 5/5

It is like a rap, lol. Nice, keep it up. 5/5

Excellent point!! =)

I like the idea , it's not something most people write about . I think you could make it more powerful very easily ... But i'll still give you 5/5 okay ? Good job .

There is a true message in this poem that I wish everyone would take to their heart.

Yeah, I hope they listen to you dear friend! This is all we need to live peacefully with each other!
Well written! 5/5