I really like how u bring a lot of concernes to ur write.

fav part(s):

"The fighting families portrayed in movies
Alcohol and Meth, specially filled brownies"
^^^ thats good because it really does show how pathetic things can get.

5/5

~tia

I love the way you portray the problems that is happening in our modern day society. Indeed you have tackle the subject really well. The choice of words that you used really brings the poetry to life. I love how you end it with those questions...indeed the world is in need of an angel.

Excellent Job
5/5 from me