Comments : My Two Cents

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Lol. interesting to say the least.. lol. so is this your motto in life? Whenever stuff gets hard, pull down your pants haha.
    It was cute and written really well :]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lololol, yes very funny Azzza:)

    You know, a spanking is not considered a punishment to all people;)

    It really brightened up my day, this silly rant of yours, ha ha.

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Vera

    :P LOL, Nice!
    So funny i really liked it!

  • 15 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Lol love it! thanks for taking time to read my poem 5/5 :)

  • I love this. If you were a female I would call this poem sassy, but ur not so the appropriate word escapes me.
    "Ways to gain more fans
    Start your own trend
    Ratings always a ten
    Without seductive scent"
    ^^^^^^
    Funny...I like the way you word this. The fact that the lines are kind've broken up and daon't totally link to one another adds to the tone.

    My favorite part is the last stanza. I like how you're saying I'm giving my opionion whether you like it or not...so take it.

    GREAT JOB!!

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    LOL that was so funny, it really had me cracking up! I think alot of poets need to read this....sometimes all the comments and votes don't mean that the poem is really that great. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman

    Made me giggle in a good way :}

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Azzza, waw, i love this. I can relates to this so much. I like the PUN in you, yet you plays with powerful words which hold such strong meanings. My favorite stanza,
    "Going certain extend
    Rules broken and mends
    Enemies just pretend
    Fake smiles are send." Sometimes i just observe the so-called friends. Before your presence they put thir best smile on the lips, but behind they are the real grey night monsters. Very well done my friend, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Love the last stanza made laugh hella hard. love it. :) one of my favorites 5/5