Save Me

by Hopelessly Devoted to You   Jan 6, 2009


[[*If you read this please comment and let me know what you think or if there's anything wrong with it because I'm not quite sure if it makes sense....thanks!*]]

You are my addiction, a drug to me,
being with you is like breaking free,
to hold you, if I must I will fight,
to part from you is my kryptonite,
I fall asleep with you on my mind,
I wish for us I could just stop time,
and never worry about ending the day,
'cause then you would be here to stay.

But sadly time will never stop,
it's true you were here, but now you're not,
the days end and slowly pass me by,
and I'm here wondering why I still cry.

My kryptonite has been unleashed,
my world, it crumbles to my grief,
I need to see you or hold you tight,
to raise the sun from my darkest night,
be my wings and help me soar,
stitch this heart of mine you tore,
come back to me and be my all,
catch me please and don't let me fall.

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  • 11 years ago

    by lillie

    Great piece truly enjoyed it, although i think one part can be slightly changed

    "be my wings and help me soar,
    stitch this heart of mine you tore,"

    to make it flow more you could say
    "Stitch this heart of mine, which you tore"

    Just gives it that flow :)
    GREAT POEM 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Nice poem.."to part from you is my kryptonite."..i love this line..keep writing more poems.....thumbs up