Written Out of Thoughts

Great poem

LOONNNG gabby comment time :D

Sometimes what you need is a friend
Not someone you can gossip with or hang out
Someone you can actually trust
You can talk to them about your problems

^^ this first part, it really makes you think "what's friendship to me". Whichhhhh I like, a lot. because it's a question a lot of people really need to ask themselves....are their friends more than just, you know, door knobs.

You never really liked me did you?
Always left me feeling like the out cast
And now you're in total shock
Why the poem's coming out so fast
But you don't even see why I'm so sick of you
I'm sorry, I deserve better
Then friends that treat people like you

^^ wow...um, is it bad that I stopped thinking about that this was from your friend's thoughts and not mine? sounds like how i feel about a certain person i know...one of my favourite parts about your poems, jesse, is that even if they're not made to be relatable, they're super relatable in some backwards little way. and so the reader can always feel them. :]

love it wesse.
tell her i think she deserves better too.

Very well put. It had really strong emotions, 5/5.

-mandy :)