Tangled in your lies

Once again, the title drew me in, and the poem impressed me.
You have a wonderful way with words. Great work.

Waking up to bitter taste of reality

verynice

I loooove how this poem flows good job. fav so far 5/5

See? Now I can analyze easily. ^_^

"Trapped within your violent dreams
Unheard voices from my silent scream
Nightmare tickets couldn't be redeemed
Insanity being pushed to the extreme"
Okay, here we go, shall we? :]
Firstly, I absolutely LOVE all of the different context of this. I mean, the metaphors are simply beautiful. :] "Nightmare tickets couldn't be redeemed" That was just simply awesome. :]

"Melancholy twist of euphoric surprise
No souls listening to my hidden cries
Sweet promises tangled in your lies
Debt mounting, unable to pay the price"
This is slightly depressing.. :/ I like the negativity in this, but also.. i'm not absolutely sure what to call it. Realization, possibly? Or.. sad, hurt, understanding.

"Waking up to bitter taste of reality
Life hanging on uncertain destiny
Expired drugs provides no remedy
Angels unable to lift me from gravity"
I think "Provides" is supposed to be "provide" but i could be wrong. Ooh, here, are we talking about suicide? We better not be. -.-

"Tormented to the edge of the seat
Enslaved producing unwanted seed
Useless repetitions of endless plead
If only you'd let me go, then I'd be complete"
Very well done. ^_^ This is very sad, like being in a cage, stuck doing something you don't want to do, having no choice, its horrible.

Very sad. Depressing, but well done.
Now.. I could be completely wrong on how i saw this, but than again, everyone brain is different, we see things oddly sometimes ;)
5/5 all the way.

Azzza!
Ooh baby!
I can see why you won!
I loved this. I thought it showed a great concept of the title. It flowed flawlessly, and your rhymes were fantastic. 5/5