Comments : Fantasy

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow seriously you have taken your poems to a whole new level. Having your feelings emotion metaphors all compacted into one. Indeed this is your best work.There is no denying that you're very talented. Your poem just speaks for yourself. Every words and every lines has a a great depth of meaning to it and you made it come to live

    bodies come together as two candles
    pulling me into a long awaited kiss
    flames unite melting together as one
    flying above reaching heavenly bliss

    ^^^ I love the way u use the candle as the metaphor and melting it into one it's juz beautiful

    Overall this poem was really a delightful to read and you have done a spectacular job;)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow, what a delight to read. Its sad when you only have that in your dreams.. but you wrote it so well. The flow was great and it really kept me hooked. I read it again and again, because i loved it so much.
    A fantastic write.

    bodies come together as two candles
    pulling me into a long awaited kiss
    flames unite melting together as one
    flying above reaching heavenly bliss

    ^^ Wow. This was genius. So clever. Really, this was truly amazing.

    Awesome poem.
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautifully written, the longing was almost touchable in this verse:)

    I always love a poem that really tells a story and this one does, a story of true and deep desired love.

    Great work, Sasha:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by catherine

    Gal you ROCK! you can write you are such a natural in this!!!!!