Tangled up in me.

No-no-no-no
That can't be it.
I refuge to let you stop the story half-way through.
This poem was amazing but it felt like it ended way to soon.

other than that I think HORROR should be HONNOR.
but that's just me.

Right now dont get me wrong I think it's a good poem but the old english you used just diddnt give that deep impact for me. The flow worked quite well but it was a little choppy here and there. I did find it a short poem but it contained a lovey write.
Overall it's a good poem, I was attracted to read it because of the heading.

Keep it up yours are good

Darling, die within demise.

^ This line is too wordy to stay with your flow. Would flow way better with only 5 syllables.

Forbid my heart to sing?
How dare you humble me!

^ I really enjoyed your opening lines, they drew me in and gave me the desire to read further and see what was going on.

Other than that one line your flow was spot on and I enjoyed this piece. good work.

Hmm.. it's hard to find a vivid poem these days but thn i find it in here. nice poem mixed powerful emotions are well emphasized, flawless as it is.. and honestly i have to re-read it a couple of times to understand what are you trying to portray.