Hell yeah. Loved it. It was incredibly groovy. I loved the fairie tale theme of it. Keep it up

VERY VERY awesomely written!

yes, loved the fairy tale theme...and the contrast between the day and night.

Loved it - brought a few memories back = thanks for being able to make me smile with this one holly god knows how much i really needed something like this to read on a day like today :o)

Lol..i liked that at alot. Very cool story with a very an unsuspected twist. It was like your were painting a picture with all these bright sunshiny colors, then you stabbed it, through black paint on it and burned it. Dreams have a way of doing that..lol

Excellent write Holly, you just made it to my favs list...yea I know, "big friggin deal"...lol

hey this is absolutely lovely !! Great job! i could everything so well

pati xxx

Nicely written.as i was reading it felt so real.no dout 5/5