Empty Promises

"orange summer turns winter cold"

I like the transition and the way you show a happy feeling becoming lost and cold..you have really poured out your feelings into this write..beautifully sad.
Thank you also for the comment on my write..take care.

This entire poem is absolutely amazing. The emotions pour out perfectly. The flow, and the word choice are completely on-point.

"Living life without a purpose nor a goal
Orange summer turns winter cold
Have sympathy for this tired soul
Fore you have left me a burning hole"

= This is my favourite stanza. The second line, more specifically- it created a picture in my mind, more so than any of the other lines.

Overall, a beautiful piece. :)

Briana

I like this style

Amazing poem with great emotion, well worded and the flow was exellent, loved the last stanza!
xoxo
5/5

Living life without a purpose nor a goal
Orange summer turns winter cold
Have sympathy for this tired soul
Fore you have left me a burning hole

Not just the best stanza in this poem
but the best stanza I have read in a while
Especially the line
"Orange summer turns winter cold"
Just paints a brilliant picture

The rest of the poem was very well written
It flowed really well
I really enjoyed reading it

5/5