Lol even you said it si nto based about nothign true , i have to say thsi jsut fit thousands of cases in real life jen , and i am like the way you re writing simple and clear words, the flow of the story jsut is amazing ,
i admit the STD subject is used but you used the saying in a very original way , at a point i could not decide if the desease is the child unborn or the STD , or both

and that what made the poem soo multi dimensional for me at least

i think you did a good job
great work