Confession

by ChallengexEverything   Jan 30, 2009


There's this feeling that I've been having
It didn't start out too strong
I didn't think anything of it
Didn't think it would last too long

I don't know what's going on
I want this all to stop
I wanna be happy like I was before
I wanna be back on top

I used to be successfull
I used to feel great
I used to be filled with love for myself
And now I'm filled with hate

I just want things to go back
To the way they were before
I wanna be happy again
I don't want to hurt anymore

I don't have any passion left
No confidence in myself
I don't know where it all went
I'm in desperate need of help

Sometimes I think I'm okay
Even though I'm not, I know
But maybe if I tell myself I am
These tears will cease to overflow

*it doesn't make much sense but I just had to get things out. I'm sure you guys know how that is. Comments are appreciated and I don't have a title, suggestions?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Good use of description and rhyming. Not all poems have to 'make sense' or be in order. Not all mine are!

    Once again, great job (:

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    This poem makes perfect sense to me, i can relate to most of it! The rhyming and flow were perfect! great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    I enjoyed this poem, the flow and rhyming was great.
    Very sad but touching kind of poem.

    Great Job

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I understand this poem. it was amazing. most of my poems are basically what's going through my head most of the time. it's helter skelter. but i loved reading this. it's great! keep it up! please read some of my latest poems???

  • 15 years ago

    by Donna

    Hi, i really liked this poem, it say it doesnt make sense but it does make sense.

    nicely written.

    could u have a look at some of my poems please and comment. thanks

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