I really do think this is a sweet and heartfelt poem =] It's an honest piece and I can see you mature throughout each stanza. The overall flow worked out quite well and the promises you made held so much emotion, I as a reader I believed every word you said ^^ Brilliant job

I really like the idea behind this poem. The middle 2 stanzas were my favourite. Nice flow and good choice of words, I liked that you didn't opt for the more obvious rhymes!