Comments : I Will Walk Away

  • 15 years ago

    by JCazares21

    Wow I've been there before..i can relate to a lot of your poems. Its amazing how two strangers who've never seen each other can go through the feelings of pain in a related manner.

    Very nice poem, loved it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This is fantastic .. Very heartfelt , it almost made me cry . I love the small staments that you made so powerful . This is definately one of my favorites . I usually break poems down and suggest stuff to fix .. But I can't do that here . Awesome :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Just please don't say those words again
    Those three little words
    Those words that trapped me once before
    Don't say 'You need me'

    *Those were my favorites lines. I can relate to that. I love the short syntax. Every line you use has its own emotion. Each line works with the other to form a very deep and heartfelt poem. I love the diction and how well this flows. Nice work. Nik*

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Amazing you put a lot of emotion into it plus its also easy to relate to great work 5/5 keep it up