I never thought about all the pieces of paper that we do accumulate and that define us until I read this. It is scary that so many pieces of paper are involved in our lives. Good job, the flow is excellent, the rhymes are good. 5/5

Kay
I'm glad to see you finally posted this piece.

Through history a story they tell
From moment of birth to final farewell
Pieces of paper too many to name
Defining our lives recording our name

I still have so many of those pieces of paper stored in a box in the closet. Bringing them out sometimes and holding each one and remembering .

Great job!
Love Cindy

After a long time :) ...

beautiful write ... capturing our life from birth till end in pieces of paper ... loved the idea...

An awesome write Kay, The rhyming is perfect. The message oh so true, my worst nightmare...paper. and yet in some ways so important. Those little memories to pull out later and prove to us that it really happened! Excellent!

Wow...this is unique, this is so so unique. Never thought of anything like this. Awesome. Very nicely written friend.

all the best and take care

I like the journey you have taken us on here, from dawn till dusk, youth till old age with our story stored on paper, a road map of memories, unfortunately most of mine have been thrown in the bin, but I'm hanging on to snippets of my kids! Good rhyme and rhythm, thought provoking, well done.