Sorrow

by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave   Feb 2, 2009


All I can feel is just sorrow.
Sometimes I feel at home and then I dont.
What else is in this world but only sorrow?
I dont know of anything else but sorrow.
It follows me every day and every night
it hunts my dreams and yet i have no one there to get rid of it.
But then i dont want anyone to.
Theres nothing else but sorrow in this world.

If one loves one finds out what sorrow is when you lose it.
If one hoped one finds out that its never going to come true and yet they have sorrow
If one dreams they can never feel what is there and for them they will always have sorrow.

Life is felled with sorrow and thats the only thing i know.
I use to love once but then sorrow came.
I use to hope once but then sorrow came.
And I use to dream but sorrow took all that form me
Sorrow is there always around the Conner
always hunting me.

This is all i know and all i well ever know for no one truly loves me
One day sorrow will tack me away.
Tack me away to a place that only Sorrow loves.
A place of doom.

And so I say good bye to this world felled with sorrow.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    "Sometimes I feel at home and then I dont.
    What else is in this world but only sorrow?
    I dont know of anything else but sorrow. "

    ^^ you have tried to depict a lot of sadness through these lines but the repetion of sorrow was a little off...

    "It follows me every day and every night
    it hunts my dreams and yet i have no one there to get rid of it.
    But then i dont want anyone to. "

    ^^sad tale... sadness is haunting indeed ... i would suggest try removing the unnecessary I's

    the structure of the next stanza didnt matched the first ... may be you wanted it to be that way... but it threw the rhythem off...

    I felt too much use of sorrow ... you can try replacing them with other synonyms... try removing filler words ... that should help i guess...

    overall I loved a emotions benind the poem... a good attempt

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