Comments : Is what I see what you see?

  • 15 years ago

    by Kurt

    A truly wonderful piece. Needless to say I am consistently captivated by your rhythm and ability to create wonderful cadence. I have oft wondered if people saw things the way my eyes saw them. However, i could never put this into words nearly as beautifully as you did.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very thought provoking and well written

  • 15 years ago

    by David Dork

    I wanted to read more of your work to find something I like but again I diddnt really enjoy this poem, It was different in style to most that I have read on here before but it diddnt capture me. It's a very good attempt at this style of poem but It's really the structure that threw me off completly. However It's an imaginative and as Micheal said above thought provoking so nice job.