Truely nice poem with nice story lines... u can make it more more better but let me help you with the 5th point ... maybe u like it.....

change it to....

I think I've died a little
inside, every time you've hugged
me and trusted me and told me
what an amazing friend i am.
((You Shackled me in your paradox

Should I smile because he's my friend, or cry because that's all he is?..))