It's been such a while since you last wrote anything but this is such a great poem with such depth and the style was much different to your usual genres. None the less as always it's great to read something from you.

"For what is love but an emotion
No longer feeling pain
Only happiness
May Loves breath remain "

^^ I truly love this part of your poem. It spells so much of hope and passion for love to continue and yet at the same time provides the message that like all other things love too is still a feeling.

Amazing work that deserves nothing less than 5/5!

Its good...
really good...

I'm not going to pick out piece by piece your poem because I think its kinda disrespectful...

If you like something, you like all of it...
and I loved your poems,,,

definitely ganna keep and eye on you.