Don't you try and act like everything's okay.

we all jenny try to act like everythign si ok , and hide behind the smiling clown mask. specialy when nothing is working . ...

Everytime I tell you no you turn your head away.

that do you expect from someone you say NO to ?

keep looking at you and cry , or just ignore your saying?
..

we all lie in our days jen, it si a question of about what ? or for what?

take your hand to fix his head .. after his lies ? after his bluff? you still want to fix his head ?

how many times will you fix ? how many ?

^_^

great poem jenny , many thoughts i had with every line i read .,. i can not coment on the rhyme and structure , you are gifted in these things

as usal 5 /5