This Is Love

This was a cute one too (=

GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!! 5/5, nuthing left to say :)

This was so sweet. i'm sure he loved it!! keep it up, you're doing a great job with writing!! please read and comment on "lasting" i would like to see wgat you think of it.

I thought this was great, very well done :] its simple and cute, those are usually the best love poems good job

I dont usually write love poems,
But im going to try today.This poem goes out to a special guy,
Who has taken my breath away.

"The first stanza was good. The emotion and the flow but you made a few errors. The first line you need a apostrophe in "Don't" and in the second line you need one with "I'm"."

The smile i wear upon my face,
Is always because of you,
You seem to be the only one,
Who can pick me up when im feeling blue.

"Again another good stanza and the flow was good and the emotion. The only mistake is in the fourth line you need an apostrophe in "I'm"."

My last thought is always of you,
When i close my eyes at night,
I go to sleep with a smile on my face,
Because I know this feels so right.

"This stanza was perfect. The rhyme and the flow and everything else went right into place."

Your loyalty towards me,
Astounds me every time,
Im so lucky to know you,
Even luckier to call you mine.

"This stanza was good as well. The only mistake is you need a apostrophe in the third line with "I'm"."

I know we have something special,
Cause i can trust you with all my heart,
Your such an amazing person,
And im in agony whenever we're apart.

"This was another great stanza. The only mistake is in the fourth line you need an apostrophe in I'm"."

You remind me of a beautiful rainbow,
After hours of pouring rain.
Youre so very special to me,
Youre the one who keeps me sane.

"Another great stanza and the only mistake is in line three and four. you need an apostrophe in "You're"."

The way you always treat me,
Gives me a feeling i never understood,
A feeling that ive never felt,
You make me feel so good.

"Good stanza but in the third line you need and apostrophe with "I've"."

I want to say thankyou,
For turning my life around,
Youve given me something to live for,
You got me up off the ground.

"Good stanza the emotion can be felt through every stanza. The first line ther should be a space between "thank and you". And in line three there should be an apostrophe in "you've"."

You are like an angel, sent from heaven above.
I should thank God for you, cause baby this is love.

Good last stanza and overall this was really a great poem. The only problems were a few punctuation errors. This poem had a good consistent flow and a good rhyme. Good job.