Beautifully written Cara:)

This poem affects me personally because I have friends there...I am so very worried:/

Thew thing that hurts me most is that they said on the news that the fires were lit by people:/

Last year, in Greece the big fires were also caused by people who wanted to burn down the forest, just so they could start building hotels on it:/

I hope the perpetrators will burn in hell themselves:/

Hugs dear friend,

5/5 Ingrid

A wonderful poem!
Showing how painful it was for the victums
of the fire!
5/5

A beautifull doublet , i simply love the simplicity and the clarity of this piece . flow was excelent and the rhyming was great . structure wise i can not coment on this piece.

everyone lose things in this life. what we lose is more than what we keep in this life . but sometimes a little thing we keep mean to us more than all those others .

sometimes a little something beautifull
will seem to someon soo wonderufull
and he will keep it next to him at hight
and it will mean more than the sunlight

you have my vote
5/5
CJ

Excellent. Somehow you have captured fire as if you had lived through one. Fire is the thing I fear the most and I hope I never have to go through what those people are. Everytime I hear about wild fires, I pray for those people and pray for rain or something to stop the death and destruction. 5/5

OMG Cara,

This piece is just brilliant. It really got me like WOW.No doubt that the when the news came out about the blaze incident. It came as a shocked to everyone and i think it must been shocking for you too as it happen in your country. Well the fire may burn some of the price possession but it can't take away all the lives...I can feel as if the people screaming for their life when i read this poem of your...The way you describe it really brought the poem to life. It's true but yet sad how you end it.This poem just proves that you have become an amazing poet. I'm so proud of you

Excellent Job
5/5

Cara..I'm so sorry I haven't read your poems in a while.
I love reading your poetry because I like to see you improving yourself and your talent..I truly respect that in you.
Your rhyme is becoming very much better..Two thumbs up and my applause for this.
I love your couplets..they were so full of simplicity yet so touchy.
You somehow make me read your poetry..I don't know how lol.

Write on =]

This was amazing. Its such a sad story with those fires destroying everything and taking so many lives. You did an absolutly brilliant job at wording this and it flowed so well. Verry well written. Keep it up. This deserves nothing less then a five. =]

Hey Cara well done on an excellent poem , i wrote one last year about the fires here in south africa which by the way are blazing again, over 200 of them.
I have been following the Victoria fires on the news and pray the people of the area will stay safe, though i'm aware of all the lost lives already.
Well done girl

Grant

This dedication is beautiful and I'm sure it means a lot to everyone that lost everything in those fires. This was an emotional piece, the words really portrayed the message you were trying to get across. 5/5

Wow, this was so beautifully written, and just the words pulled me in and made me not want the poem to end. The rhyming was great and just wow.

excellent work
5/5

This is an honest yet beautifully tragic dedication to those in the bush fires. It's always difficult to base poems on real events as it sometimes distracts the writer from writing a poem, not just stating what happened, and loosing that poetic touch. But you have both here, the imagery was great, the rhyming worked, and you should be proud of this piece. Well done you!

So nice.. i like it as i do with all ur other ones.. keep it up 5/5