So overwhelming ... heartfelt write ...

I felt so sad after reading it ... you have beautifully narrated ... and readers are left with a feeling that this may happen every day to the girl which makes it even more touching...
child abuse is the most horrible crime commited against any minor ...
wonderful write...

Kaylee it is so good to see you posting again. This is a very deep and intense poem. Full of so much sadness. It is so hard to think that one person can handle so much heartache.
Excellent job on this.
Love Cindy

This is very heartbreaking. Even thinking of this crime gives me shivering, but i am glad you wrote abt it...people need to read.

Very nicely written

all the best and take care

What a heartbreaking write! Your use of words and detail really set the sad scene for me and it was as if I was seeing everything with my own two eyes. The depth here was mind blowing and the emotion was real. I hope this doesnt come from personal experiance but the way you wrote it was so real that it could only be scripted with real experiance. All in alll I enjoyed it although it broke my hearft. I like that you didnt go into detail what exactly happened because I made my own lil story while reading it.

Well done.
*5/5*