I really like your peoem! These used to be exactly the thoughts that were spinning in my head once. But I promise, life can be just as wonderful as well.. Just think positive :)

Your rhyming is perfect thats something I
have never been good at. I lived so many
more years than you and yet I still lost
and looking for something to just snap
me out of this darkness. Your poems talk
to me and i relate and I want so bad to
say the words to make you "happy" to
help you not waste anymore time in the
dark. life is suppose to be simple you know
just love someone, Be loved, Be happy at what you do and try not to inflick pain on anyone especially yourself. easy huh? yea
maybe in the movies but here in the real world reality bites . anyway sorry about the long comment but yourexcellent poem got me thinking. theres one thing alot of us do that really is a big mistake We hold onto
bad stuff in our heads like it something special man let that stuff gooooooooo NOWWWWWWWWWWWWW

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