It's valentines day
So listen to what I'm about to say
Those of you who are alone
With no one to call your own
Those who are hurt
And feels like dirt
You want to scream
Cause it feels like no one is on your team
It starts to get dim
But still you feel you can win
Now as it gets dark
You are barely leaving a mark
Then to your surprise
That perfect one will come in time
That one that will be there for you at the drop of a dime
I liked this poem as it gives facts to those who were alone and allows many different emotions out at one time. However, I felt that in some parts the rhyming was forced.
"Cause it feels like no one is on your team"
I feel this line should be changed to having Feel instead of feels so it makes sense and also because you are still writting about the previous sentence where you mentioned "those".