I hope you really don't feel this way
but your poem for me was great
keep writing and i'll keep reading

Man, this is a wonderful work. I love it! The tune in it is really touching, It's truly like Your Word, and i bet u will always keep that guts and traits of being yourself no matter what, man! keep it up!

Awww you write about me! Lol its very sad but I love the rhyme scheme and the flow.
Its so well structured and the words just hit me. Good write 5/5
Thanks for the comment on my poem too :)

5/5 i really like this poem... hope you are not going trough it.. really took my attention in!! keep writting i'll be reading

That is a very sad statement..you will always be somebody, even after death!
This poem reveals so much sadness and resignation..I wonder if it was the same, say 100 years ago ,when each person had to work in the fields all day long and we didn't have that much time to think...I often feel we have too much time to think about ourselves ( I am one of them!)
You did well on portraying your emotions, I hope things will feel different soon:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

A very sad write lol... deep, and heartfelt. At times in our lives circumstances are like dark clouds that surround us... and we feel there is no way out. Depression can cause a weariness in our life that is hard to express, but you expressed it well here lol.. Hope things are looking up for you.

Best wishes,
Olwin.

Such a deep, emotional piece. We all get like this at times. Good job, 5/5. Em x

Wonderful wonderful ..awesome ... I love the poem ... excellent ..I was in search of sucha poem ..Thank you -- 5/5
biya

What's a wonderful poem is this !!!! one of the best that i've ever read , so sad & deep .
Perfect job 5/5 .
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I love this poem and everyone feels that way at sometime or other. keep writing!!! i look forward to reading more from you... plz!!! keep writing!!

I love this poem and everyone feels that way at sometime or other. keep writing!!! i look forward to reading more from you... plz!!! keep writing!!

So deep, great poem :)

Flowed very well and I feel you!