What and emotional piece of writing. I feel that you expertly conveyed your feelings by picking the appropriate words for certain places. Definately well done. 5/5.

I love this poem, so deep and filled with emotions, keep up the good work

The love has died inside yourself
No chance for soul to heal
The broken chain of loss was dealt
The memories surreal
Of shattered dreams that died in vain
And rays that left the sun
In darkness now you cry in pain
Then close your heart and run.

This stanza tells so much, everytime i read it...i get a new meaning out of it, loved the whole poem.
Awesome.

all the best and take care

Jeannie
This is a wonderful poem. So sad.

The love has died inside yourself
No chance for soul to heal
The broken chain of loss was dealt
The memories surreal
Of shattered dreams that died in vain
And rays that left the sun
In darkness now you cry in pain
Then close your heart and run.

These words just went straight to my heart.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy